范文講評：旅游事業

　　　　「要求」

　　　　要求：旅游事業對我國具有舉足輕重的作用。請以Ways to Improve Chinas Tourism為題為我國旅游事業的發展提幾點建議。（提示：擴大宣傳，改善旅游設施，提高服務質量）

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　　　　Ways to Improve chinas tourism

　　　　Tourism is now becoming a major industry throughout the world. However，tourism in China is not as developed as it should be. If the following is done，Chinas tourism will definitely be improved.

　　　　First，our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists. Second，facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip. Finally，the quality of service should be improved.

　　　　Dont tell people their ideas are bad unless youve got a good one.

　　　　「評語」

　　　　本文第一段提出問題，第二段解決問題，first，second，finally等詞的使用，使整篇文章條理格外清晰。