I have learned from my friend Tom of your vacancy for a secretary, and am therefore writing to apply for the position.

　　I am confident that my academic training has prepared me to handle this job. To begin with, I have a good command of professional knowledge and can speak English fluently. In addition, I gained much experience in my previous work. With my qualification and ability, I am convinced that I will make satisfactory contribution towards development of your company.

　　Im looking foward to an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours Sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam, I have learned from my friend Tom of your vacancy for a secretary, and (建議加I)am therefore writing to apply for the position. I am confident that my academic training has prepared me to handle this job. To begin with, I have a good command of professional knowledge and (加I)can speak English fluently. In addition, I gained much experience in my previous work. With my qualification and ability, I am convinced that I will make satisfactory contribution towards (加定冠詞the)development of your company. Im looking forward(拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，forward) to an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming 點(diǎn)評(píng)：6分第二段的第二部分內(nèi)容給人感覺(jué)很空曠，要讓你的內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)。

　　I have learned from my friend Tom of your vacancy for a secretary, and am therefore writing to apply for the position.

　　I am confident that my academic training has prepared me to handle this job. To begin with, I have a good command of professional knowledge and can speak English fluently. In addition, I gained much experience in my previous work. With my qualification and ability, I am convinced that I will make satisfactory contribution towards development of your company.

　　Im looking foward to an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours Sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam, I have learned from my friend Tom of your vacancy for a secretary, and (建議加I)am therefore writing to apply for the position. I am confident that my academic training has prepared me to handle this job. To begin with, I have a good command of professional knowledge and (加I)can speak English fluently. In addition, I gained much experience in my previous work. With my qualification and ability, I am convinced that I will make satisfactory contribution towards (加定冠詞the)development of your company. Im looking forward(拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，forward) to an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming 點(diǎn)評(píng)：6分第二段的第二部分內(nèi)容給人感覺(jué)很空曠，要讓你的內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)。